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John Richardson's avatar

Absolutely brilliant - I've shared it with my partner and her friend for their Bookclub! Thanks

Paul Crofts's avatar

Excellent deconstruction. Loved it. Can you do the same for "When we were very young" with a particularly focus on Sir Brian Botany? I love this poem.

Gregor Gall's avatar

This reminds of Harry McClintock's 'Big Rock Candy Mountain' (1928). McClintock was an active Wobbly. A song of paradise, if not socialism, for hobos:

One evening as the sun went down

And the jungle fire was burning

Down the track came a hobo hikin'

And he said, "Boys, I'm not turning

I'm headed for a land that's far away

Beside the crystal fountains

So come with me, we'll go and see

The Big Rock Candy Mountains"

In the Big Rock Candy Mountains

There's a land that's fair and bright

Where the handouts grow on bushes

And you sleep out every night

Where the boxcars all are empty

And the sun shines every day

On the birds and the bees and the cigarette trees

The lemonade springs where the bluebird sings

In the Big Rock Candy Mountains

In the Big Rock Candy Mountains

All the cops have wooden legs

And the bulldogs all have rubber teeth

And the hens lay soft-boiled eggs

The farmers' trees are full of fruit

And the barns are full of hay

Oh, I'm bound to go where there ain't no snow

Where the rain don't fall, the wind don't blow

In the Big Rock Candy Mountains

In the Big Rock Candy Mountains

You never change your socks

And the little streams of alcohol

Come trickling down the rocks

The brakemen have to tip their hats

And the railroad bulls are blind

There's a lake of stew and of whiskey too

You can paddle all around them in a big canoe

In the Big Rock Candy Mountains

In the Big Rock Candy Mountains

The jails are made of tin

And you can walk right out again

As soon as you are in

There ain't no short-handled shovels

No axes, saws, or picks

I'm a-going to stay where you sleep all day

Where they hung the Turk that invented work

In the Big Rock Candy Mountains

I'll see you all this coming fall

In the Big Rock Candy Mountains